As you drown
I'll offer no comfort
As you go down
I'll sing you no praises
As you near death
I'll lend you no mercy
While you lose breath
I won't heed your cry
Lost in the tide
I won't take your hit
As you're swinging wide
I will not hold you as you drown.
Instead I will fight
Withstand the cold
I'll knock you unconscious
To help you float
I will not be gentle
Pulling you in
I will make you bleed
If it makes you swim
For love cannot be
A gentle defeat
For nice is not good
And death is not sweet
I will not hold you as you drown.
love this "for love cannot be a gentle retreat"...
ReplyDeleteFantastic composition. Reminded me of Dylan Thomas.
ReplyDeleteprofoundly put.
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ReplyDeleteMagnificently said.
ReplyDeletewow this is insightful to the max..
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